With Sharon this week we made a video on biteable a video making website I enjoyed it, it was fun!
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, August 14, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Bronson,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the biteable/screencastify you created for the Smart Relationships - Lesson 2 work. You have done a wonderful job of communicating how to put together a quality blog comment. Ka mau te wehi - that's amazing!
Your next job is to create a quality post to go along side your great DLO's. Keep up the great mahi Bronson,
:) Sharon - Education Programme Leader Te Ara Tūhura
Morena Bronson,
ReplyDeleteWow! I love your biteable video about quality blog comments. You have identified the main parts of a quality comment. I would love to share this video with a class I'm working with at the moment as I'm also a facilitator like Sharon, working in Northland.
Do you think you will be able to write quality comments now? Have you thought about including an example of a quality blog comment in your post? I think this would really help out those that are still stuck on writing their comments.
Venessa - Manaiakalani Outreach Facilitator in Northland (Te Hiku)
Hi Venessa.
DeleteIm glad to hear you liked my video, It would be awsome if you could share it with your class, thank you for the help.
Kia Ora Bronson,
ReplyDeleteI'm Miss McCombie from Belfast School which around 10 minute drive from your school.
What a fantastic Biteable video! I am really impressed that you have picked out the important parts for writing a quality blog comment and produced such an engaging video for your viewers. Did you find Biteable easy to use?
I am hoping to teach some of my children in my class to become experts in Biteable and share their knowledge across the syndicate. What advice would you give me?
Fantastic job, looking forward to see more post from you!
Have a great day,
Miss McCombie.
Hi thank you that was a heart warming comment. Im glad to hear your children are learning biteable it was so fun and easy to use hope they enjoy it :).
ReplyDeleteHi Bronson,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the help of what is in a great blog comment. I think Jim is now a expert at comments now. Did you do stepping up or confident?.
From Jacob
Kia ora my name is June
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added bold words
Why did you make this post ?
Hi im Rehutai I’m from Ngataki school. It is impressive how you used interesting words and I wonder why do you need a quality comment?
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ReplyDeleteKia ora ko Anahera toku ingoa I go to Ngataki school.I enjoyed the part when u started with how to make a quality blog comment.Did you move it and then turned it into a video?
ReplyDeleteKi ora my name is Brooklyn im from Ngataki school I liked how you explained how to make a good quality blog and my question is did you enjoy creating this post?
ReplyDeleteHi Brooklyn, thank you for watching my video about blog commenting, right now i am working on how to reply to blog comments. I enjoyed making this video a lot it was really fun. have you made a video on biteable yet?
Deletedear Bronson,
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Ataahua and i'm a year 8 student from Ngataki school.I liked the way you explained the begging,middle and end of a quality blog comment.My favourite part was when you said”how does that sound Jim
‘And he put up 3 ten's I thought that was cool.You didn't really explain the purpose of the video so can you tell me the purpose?
Ki ora Bronson my name is Mayya i’m a 8 student and attend Ngataki school.You did a great job explaining how to write a quality comment it was very helpful. What was you purpose for this video?
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Amaleia Im from Ngataki school you did a great job of explaining how to make a quality blog comment what made you intrested in teaching what a quality blog comment is ?
ReplyDeleteTena koe Ko Aaliyah tenei no Te Kura o Ngataki
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained about how to make a quality blog comment but
Maybe next time you could try to explain what the purpose of this video was
Hi Bronson I am Jacob from marshland school/your neighbour
ReplyDeletei really like your blog post i now have learnt how to use bitable
thankyou
regards jacob
Hi Bronson Its Jacob from marshland.
ReplyDeleteschool again when I listened/watched your video I also found it have to hear your voice.and it was because your audio was too loud and your voice was a little quiet. I hope you remember next time you make a video. BYE :)
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