My awsome holiday in Bali!

the day we left
today we left to Bali, the plane ride was long, but it was definitely worth it. when I arrived I swam in our private pool.

Water Bom Bali
today we went to the water park, my favorite part was the huge water slide were you stand in this transparent tube and then the floor drops and you go falling down the slide.

Bali safari
today we went to the zoo and saw so many awesome animals I have never ever seen before. my favorite animal was probably the elephants me and my dad rid.

snorkeling
today we went snorkeling in the sea, we saw so many fish of all different shapes and sizes.

Going back home
today were going back to new zealand

I made this street in sumo paint

we made a green screen!!!!

                            we made a green screen and wrote a story to read Please wear headphones

we made a prediction

  WE learned about predicting, we are predicting about a story called Do not push

I watched this video and it helped me make these tips for writing a quality comment

                                                         

• Tips for writing a quality comment

•  Complement the blog post in a specific way
• If you like the post tell the blogger
•  Alawys make sure to have a nice comment  and no bad ones
•   If the blogger gives you a complement give them one back    

• Add new information    
• It’s good to add factual information about your comment    
•  Look at the comments and see if anyone has commented what you want to comment

If not then comment it.

• Make a connection  
• Say some facts about you or somthing you like or did
• If the blogger asks you a question answer it

• End with a question                 
• If there is something you dont know but want to know ask the blogger
• If you ask the question you will be happy you have the answer
• Make sure to ask a question no one has asked

We learned about time with mrs roach here is a fun time game I made

                                                             please make a copy
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my birthday!

It was my birthday horray!!