Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Tuesday, May 12, 2020
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Hi Bronson,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your slideshow about the life of Mary. She was a dedicated servant to God and her son Jesus for her whole life and she has many stories to tell, as we know from the bible.I loved how you were able to put each story into your own words and I also loved the pictures and images you used to present each slide. Great job!
Hi Bronson
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool slide show I like how you added pictures .maybe next time you could try not to stretch the pitures width way. I also like how you made it clear what the slide was and added a title.you did a great good!
Thank you Leo next time I will try not to stretch the pictures I really needed the feedback!
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